Addvertisement Rework

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Advertisement Review:

The original ad was too cluttered and did not make use of C.R.A.P. Everything was far too large, and filled up too much space. And almost nothing was aligned asides from the left side of the text. I did not preplan my ads on paper, I just got to work, which is probably the reason I struggled a bit getting started on the assignment.